Writing Process

So for the writing process I tried really hard to think of what to write, but I don't think I found the right words to get my point across. I talked about the melting ice caps and the problems it causes; is that still too broad of a topic. I wrote on the ice caps because I thought it'd be one of the effects of climate change and therefore not as broad. I'm not really sure what to write... I wrote the paper, it took me awhile, and it was very frustrating. For the life of me I could not remember how to cite my sources in the paper, but I tried. Hope you don't think my paper's a total failure.